Tutor feedback/Development of existing design

To gain more knowledge before I develop the existing KINETIC TYPE idea I reached out to my tutor Karl, shown him the design and asked of his opinion. He advised me of some alterations needed. I agreed with him and done that. With all the info of different styles of K.T I then drawn a storyboard of how the video needs to be. I don't have it to show due to handing it in to the tutors. It was also required to be the final piece along with the video.